I
was talking with a friend the other day and noticed we were both conversing in
clichés more than usual. We cut to the chase and left no stone unturned while
things came down the pike when they weren’t coming out of the woodwork. We all
use clichés when speaking, since it is hard to be extemporaneously original and
eloquent at all times, but on those occasions when they dominate our speech, it
is likely that we don’t have much of substance to say. This was indeed the case
the other day: nothing much new had happened (about which either of us wanted
to talk anyway) since the last time we’d met, so we filled the air with
familiar sounds before going our separate ways. Speech is one thing, but excessive
use of cliché when writing is simply lazy – a vice not altogether alien to me.
Well, there is no point crying over spilled milk.
Clichés
often linger past the time when their literal meaning is understood. For
example, “by and large,” a phrase I employed twice in the same blog three posts
ago, is a sailing term meaning “against and with the wind,” which I’d bet is
news to most people who use it in place of "generally." Clichés often are clever – or at least so they
seem the first 1000 times we hear them. Unsurprisingly, then, Shakespeare is
the origin of more than a few: wild goose chase (Romeo and Juliet); be-all, end-all (Macbeth); dead as a doornail (Henry
VI, Part II); heart of gold (Henry V);
break the ice (The Taming of the Shrew);
good riddance (Troilus and Cressida);
cruel to be kind (Hamlet); seen
better days (As You Like It); and,
well, you get the idea. Yet, not every familiar saying is a cliché. The word
“cliché” originally referred to block printing, which gives us clue about how a
saying transitions to one: overuse. When a phrase or word combination has
become so trite that it is less effective than the simple word it replaces, it
is probably best to use the simple word. So, at this juncture (which is a
cliché), it is probably better to describe someone as reacting “impulsively”
rather than “at the drop of a hat.” To be sure, “overuse” is (here comes a
cliché) in the eye of the beholder but most of us will say (yes, here comes
another) “I know it when I see it.”
None
of this really matters except to writers who wish their prose to be more fresh
than stale. Nowadays, however, a great many folks self-publish, whether in
print or online (including blogs such as this one) with little or no editorial
review. A second or third thought given to style, along with the basics of
spelling and grammar, can do no harm. They (we) might find helpful It’s Been Said Before: A Guide to the Use
and Abuse of Clichés by
lexicographer Orin Hargraves, past president of the Dictionary Society of North
America. The book is pretty much what the title says it is. Hargraves
categorizes the different types of clichés and explains how they differ from
idioms. He discusses hundreds of examples, with remarks on how each one may be
best used or avoided and in what context. He readily admits that any such
discussion is subjective, but his solid credentials make his opinions worth noting.
Hargraves
doesn’t eschew all clichés even in semiformal prose. There are times when they
are apt and when they can convey an idea to a reader quickly in an easily
understandable way. He urges authors to write mindfully, however, and to
consider if a shopworn phrase (yes, “a shopworn phrase” is a cliché) is the
best way to convey one’s meaning. He quotes George Orwell, a very mindful
writer, regarding clichés:
“They
will construct your sentences for you – even think your thoughts for you to a
certain extent – and at need they will perform the important service of
partially concealing your meaning even from yourself.”
So,
rather than immediately resorting to cliché when at the keyboard burning the
midnight oil, bite the bullet, pull out all the bells and whistles, wear many
hats, take the cake, and then breathe a sigh of relief.
Biff Rose – Ballad of Cliches (1969)
Originality is a dish best served cold, or something like that. It's hard to be original, and maybe nothing is original at this point in literature anyway. Better writers I think just think of fresh ways to write and fresh ways to tell stories that trick one into thinking it's original. Being original is an uphill battle, but you can't please everyone.
ReplyDeleteNothing is said that has not been said before." -- Terence c. 150 BCE.
DeleteWell, we probably don't say it in Latin.